Comments on: Friday Flash Fiction: Tinman

By: Chaobell

Chaobell — Wed, 20 Feb 2008 17:33:39 +0000

Oh, wow. I like it.

Thanks for a great little read.

By: Neil

Neil — Wed, 20 Feb 2008 07:15:33 +0000

Thanks for dropping by Owen, and cheers for the feedback.

By: Owen

Owen — Tue, 19 Feb 2008 13:51:28 +0000

Very nice, read it on the link from your post at Whatever, good work, i hope you expand it. My only crit is the bit about the UN and supersoldier fears in the wiki article didn’t work for me.

By: ShaunCG

ShaunCG — Tue, 19 Feb 2008 12:20:19 +0000

This is a really interesting piece, I like it a lot. You really nailed the Wikipedian tone in that substory!

By: Neil

Neil — Sat, 16 Feb 2008 22:56:53 +0000

Thanks guys, glad you liked it

Dan: I think this may become something larger, if it does it will almost certainly involve a fuller online installation. In its current form I’m not sure it fully gets to where I wanted to go.

If that makes any sense.

By: dan

dan — Sat, 16 Feb 2008 21:13:03 +0000

really interesting. To my mind, the only flaw is that each link is on the same Other Side of the River template, and the homogeneity spoils the effect a little bit. But I don’t expect you to build four new websites just for one piece of flash! Good story though.

By: GLP

GLP — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 20:39:29 +0000

I like this Neil. I think I’m going to have to read it again, just to take it all in. But I like it.

By: Clive Birnie

Clive Birnie — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 20:13:09 +0000

Really enjoyed this Neil. I am left with the sense of a bigger story and I am full of questions.