Comments on: Friday Flash Fiction: Descent

By: Dan

Dan — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 18:34:44 +0000

I like the plummeting ending. Good.

Neil — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 11:31:38 +0000

Thanks all. Glad you liked it. And a big thanks to G who came up with the title.

Gareth D Jones — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 18:32:04 +0000

Good mixture of dream / reality, gave it great realism.

Fri, 27 Jun 2008 13:13:53 +0000

I like the title too ;o)

Abbi — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 12:46:17 +0000

I like. It has a cinematic feel to it. Like it’s the start of a film.

GLP — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 12:37:33 +0000

Nice one. Good build up and good payoff. Looks like you’re back in the game.

friendlygun — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 12:26:36 +0000

Good piece – thematically consistent, vivid images, nicely written. Thanks for sharing!